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 Levi Bjorn

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PostSubject: Levi Bjorn   Tue Jul 15, 2014 5:32 pm

Name: Levi Bjorn

Title: Shade

Gender: Male

Age: 23


Background: Levi grew up in Stockholm within the very populous country of Sweden. At a young age his parents split up which meant he only saw his mother once a year, each year on his birthday. This wasn't much of a folly for young Levi, for he typicallt pursued goals greater than those of a social child. He was raised as a child prodigy and placed within the most advanced schools within all of Sweden. His father, being a billionaire philanthropist, was rarely ever to be home with Levi but is was none a bother. Without any siblings or family around, things were a bit lonely at times. But these were the times Levi used to sharpen his mind. He would do varieties of puzzles to increase his reaction time as well as critical thinking skills. His favorite pass time, was online chess.

After his first year in school he began to challenge the upper classes and beat them all. He even went to local high schools challenging the chess teams. They too provided no challenge to him. On average, he would win in seven turns. After conquering the schools, he would enter tournaments within all of Sweden before he was final seen as a local child genius. He was undefeated. Until, one day his father came home exhausted from work. But he'd heard of his sons tremendous accomplishment and wished to play him in chess as well. His father achieved checkmate on turn 13. At that moment, Levi saw his father in a light he'd never seen before. His father had memorized the Shannon number.

This sparked the will of greatness within Levi as he strived to become the smartest man in the world, next to his father. He made his ways through the ivory schools and continued his chess career after graduating. The first place he traveled to was The United States. At the age of nineteen he was blessed with the chance to play with the legendary Bobby Fisher. Levi won, but only just barely. He was accomplished.

Two years later, the day the Excul invaded, was the last day of his soft life. The sky phased black and human beings were shredded of their existence. However, he himself was unharmed by the Excul. The reason for this was unclear to him. But it seemed his father was also immune to the attacks, for he received a phonecall informing the prodigy of the situation. Levi discovered his abilities and did not recognize quite what was happening. He seemed to fall under a species of superhuman know as a Successor. His father informed him of the entity Zack Fair. At that point, Levis motive was clear. To be the best.

Succession World: Final Fantasy

Successor: Zack Fair


Notes -
Burns reduce opponent defense by 10*/20**/30***
Frostbite reduces opponent attack by 10/30/30
Stun reduces opponent perception by 5/10/15

*Free forms

Free Forms

Fast Blade - Swiftly slashes at the target (+30 Speed, +30 Attack)

Fira/Blizzara/Thundara - Damages the opponent with an elemental attack. (+35 Magic) (Burns/frostbites/stuns the opponent) (1 Cooldown Each)

Drainra - Steals some of the targets life force and places it within oneself (+25 Magic) (2 Cooldown)

Cura - Heals most average wounds to user or target (3 Cooldown)

Esuna - Removes all status effects on user (3 Cooldown)

Dispel - Removes all buffs from one target (4 Cooldown)

Fire/Blizzard/Thunder/Dispel/Poison/Stop/Silence/Death Blade - Slashes the opponent doing minor damage but passing on a status effect for 3 turns. (2 Cooldown)

Iron Punch - Punched the enemy ignoring all enemy defenses (+20 Attack) (2 Cooldown)


Firaga/Blizzaga/Thundaga - Damages the opponent with an elemental attack. (+55 Magic) (Burns/frostbites/stuns the opponent) (3 Cooldown Each)

Dark Firaga/Blizzaga/Thundaga - Same as the previous form but inflicts Silence rather than other status effects. (6 Cooldown)

Drainaga - Steals a lot of the targets life force and places it in ones own (+40 Magic) (6 Cooldown)

Death - Instantly kills any entity (4 Cooldown)

Poison - Damages opponent every turn for five turns. This damage ignores magical defense (+20 Magic per turn) (5 Cooldown)

Osmose - Drain magical ability from the opponent. The opponents Free Forms all go into Cooldown. Any Free Forms with Cooldown less than 2 receive a 2 Cooldown for 2 posts. (8 Cooldown)

Silence - Neither character may use abilities for 3 turns. Any active abilities are canceled (6 Cooldown)

Time - Slows an opponent, decreasing speed by 20 for 4 turns. (7 Cooldown)

Curaga - Heals fatal wounds to user or target (7 Cooldown)

Regen - User heals slowly over time for five posts. (5 Cooldown)

Barrier - Increases users defense for five posts. (Def +40) (6 Cooldown)

MBarrier - Increases users magical defense for five posts. (Magic Def +40) (6 Cooldown)

Wall - Increase users defense and magical defense for five posts. (+35 Defense and Magical Defense) (9 Cooldown)

Summon Ifrit - Summons the beast known as Ifrit to assist the user in battle (10 Cooldown)

Summon Bahamut - Summons the beast known as Bahamut to assist the user in battle (10 Cooldown)

Summon Odin - Summons the beast known as Odin to assist the user in battle (10 Cooldown)

Summon Phoenix - Summons the beast known as Phoenix to assist the user in battle (10 Cooldown)

Summon Cactuar - Summons the beast known as Cactuar to assist the user in battle (10 Cooldown)


Flare - One of the strongest black magic spells. Causes damage to everything within a 50m area of the user (+85 Magic) (11 Post Cooldown) (Cannot be used until 8 posts have passed)

Ultima - The white magic equivalent of Flare

Hell Firaga/Blizzaga/Thundaga - Same as the base form, but much more powerful. In addition to the default status effects inflicted, Timd, Poison and Death are also inflicted (+80 Magic) (10 Post Cooldown) (Cannot be used until 5 posts have passed)

Osmoga - All of the opponents abilities enter Cooldown. Any abilities with Cooldown less that 4 receive a 4 turn Cooldown for 4 turns. (Cannot be used until 8 posts into battle) (12 Cooldown)

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PostSubject: Re: Levi Bjorn   Wed Jul 16, 2014 11:29 am

*Points out that Levi is a Zack Fair successor and not a Chaos successor*
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PostSubject: Re: Levi Bjorn   Wed Jul 16, 2014 12:13 pm

Unfortunately, the character is far too undefined. It's not your fault at all, it's the fault of this character's origin. There is no way to define this character to site standards. When creating abilities, you have use every single one of that character's abilities, perfectly the same in every aspect without leaving anything out or diminishing it. This being said, Zack Fair is another Mary Sue Successor with a tool box purely meant for player demand and customization. It would be the same as Succeeding a Lv. 90 Elf Warlock Priest from World of Warcraft.

I would also like to state that I wasn't giving you Chaos' abilities because I thought you were Chaos. It was because I wanted to show you that Chaos is more than viable to be powerful.

Strength - 30 Speed - 40 Defense - 5 Magic - 40 Magic Defense - 5 Sense - 5

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